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by John Gied Calpotura
—Shoebox, there's a figure of innocence greatly affected by greed and pride. Currently happening. I commend the storytelling of this piece.
—10:33 AM, the "what if" story with bitterness of coffee.
—Sugercoat, ang mapaklang aftertaste ng magic sugar.
by Bryant Lee Niervo Morales
—Bahaghari, the title and first line gave a hint that's why I wasn't surprised, overdosed with words and lines, spoonfeeding. I like it being creative and poetic but this might not be a prose but a wordy/data bombarded story.
by Mariz Leona
—First Aid, good story and use of language, lines catches emotion, and best narration. A realization was brought and justified by the whole piece.
by Mark Vincent M. Lao
—A Walk on the Ramp, there's a better title somewhere but a good essay with a lesson to keep.
by Kiel Mark C. Guerrero
—Barya 'Yan, great word play, and story flow with the rhymes is good to read.
by Grace N. Aprosta
—Anak, salamat sa paggamit ng lokal na linggwahe na siya ring nabigyang buhay sa pamamagitan ng isang mahusay na katha.
by Precy Kaye E. Distor
—I and You, you and me against boundaries, creates harmony.
by Gerald Galindez
—San Gerardo and the Exocoetidae, I have read this piece from his other zine: very creative and metaphorical.
by Gerlie M. Cariño
—Tsuper ng Buhay Ko, a letter.
by John Dominic Arellano
—Hide and Seek, I think I have read this one too: creepy and still curious about the back story.
by Mary Antonette P. Fuentes
—Dark Adaptations, I pictured cats' eyes.
by Yumi Ilagan
—Mother Kept Me Awake, the very emotion driven piece, nabigyan ng hustisya ang titulo and creative af.
by Florence Diane D. Samson
—Astral Demis, alpha and omega, the beginning and the end.
by Irish Shari Berbano
—Why I Hate the Moon, nadamay pa ang buwang walang kasalanan.
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