Not that bad for a first project. Siguro mas marami akong nakitang flaws but theme wise—very on point and walang nalihis ang landas. Technically, needs to improve. Grammar, language, structure, punctuations at ang mismong pagkukwento ay kailangan pang paghusayin. I'm looking forward for your next release.
Like what I have said earlier, I saw more thumbs down than up so I'll keep my comments for myself na lang muna. You can join more writing groups outside school to have opportunities to learn more. Padayon.
—Banuy
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